I like what you have, I am not really sure about the blue color, and I think you could work more with movement and variation of type size. I really like how you have used different fonts, for the different speakers, but I think that you could create more distinct personalities through the type.
I dont fully understand what they are talking about in this speech. I like how the type is erratic and kind of crazy, because that is the feeling that the speaker gives off. Sometimes the words move really fast, and overlap in awkward ways. Maybe it would be better to have the word flash as fast as the speaker is talking and just go away rather than overlap and get messy with whatever comes up next.
I think you could still go back and make a few of the sections that have all the same size font, filling the whole screen, a little more varied in size so that you could "design" the type layout more. Having everything be really big the whole time, makes it a little hard to read becuase you sort of just start seeing them as shapes instead of words.
I think you can give yours different font sizes. Current ones seem to have similar size. And you can also give some other colors. I think current color is not bad. But it can be also good to set the basic color like white, and then accent, emphasize some important part with the blue or red.
yeah, i think messing with size and direction would be a good thing. I like how one voice is big (like the way it sounds) and the calmer of the two men is really small.
I am so confused. Anywho, I like what you have done with your timing of transitions. They seem a bit more on target. I don't know that I would make the third speeker's speech in red - it's difficult to read and it seems like too strong of a color for his voice.
I agree with everyone. I think there should be some white in the movie too. I know you used it for the first speaker, but, the overall tone is pretty dark.
In the beginning, some of the type stays up and is overlapped by new type, which makes it a bit difficult to focus on what the viewer should read next. In the middle, the type stays the same size, color, and style for a while. I would try and switch it up to keep the viewer interested. Also, I would think about adding some sort of texture or color in the background, or just playing with the color of the type more.
I think that the colors and font could be a little more interesting, or have something that creates more of a tone to the speech, I feel like i could just have a little more visual interest with different colors. I like the transitions u use.
I like the blue color, but I don't know if I like it on the black background. I wonder what it would look like on white? Keep going though.. it looks good!!
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I like what you have, I am not really sure about the blue color, and I think you could work more with movement and variation of type size. I really like how you have used different fonts, for the different speakers, but I think that you could create more distinct personalities through the type.
I dont fully understand what they are talking about in this speech. I like how the type is erratic and kind of crazy, because that is the feeling that the speaker gives off. Sometimes the words move really fast, and overlap in awkward ways. Maybe it would be better to have the word flash as fast as the speaker is talking and just go away rather than overlap and get messy with whatever comes up next.
I think you could still go back and make a few of the sections that have all the same size font, filling the whole screen, a little more varied in size so that you could "design" the type layout more. Having everything be really big the whole time, makes it a little hard to read becuase you sort of just start seeing them as shapes instead of words.
I think you can give yours different font sizes. Current ones seem to have similar size. And you can also give some other colors. I think current color is not bad. But it can be also good to set the basic color like white, and then accent, emphasize some important part with the blue or red.
"angle" comes in a bit fast as well as i think "business" (when he says baseball business a lot.
i really like the colors for the speakers or i would have no idea what was going on. the motion mimics the speech well
yeah, i think messing with size and direction would be a good thing. I like how one voice is big (like the way it sounds) and the calmer of the two men is really small.
I am so confused. Anywho, I like what you have done with your timing of transitions. They seem a bit more on target. I don't know that I would make the third speeker's speech in red - it's difficult to read and it seems like too strong of a color for his voice.
I agree with everyone. I think there should be some white in the movie too. I know you used it for the first speaker, but, the overall tone is pretty dark.
In the beginning, some of the type stays up and is overlapped by new type, which makes it a bit difficult to focus on what the viewer should read next. In the middle, the type stays the same size, color, and style for a while. I would try and switch it up to keep the viewer interested. Also, I would think about adding some sort of texture or color in the background, or just playing with the color of the type more.
I think you did a good job choosing the typefaces, they fit the speakers well. The timing seems to be a bit off from about 20sec and on.
I think that the colors and font could be a little more interesting, or have something that creates more of a tone to the speech, I feel like i could just have a little more visual interest with different colors. I like the transitions u use.
I think you made really good color choices for your speech. I also like how you animated angle.
I like the blue color, but I don't know if I like it on the black background. I wonder what it would look like on white? Keep going though.. it looks good!!
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